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Lets take a trip
And meet the end of a bullet tip
I'll hold your hand,
If you'll hold mine
And we can find a whole new land
Don't worry we'll be just fine

A new beginning
And our very first end
We've got nothing to fear,
So long as we don't stay here

We can find our way
On a brand new day
We don't need all this anymore
So kiss me one last time
And let's take a trip
To meet the bullet tip.
©2006-2009 ~disobedient-slave
:icondisobedient-slave:

Author's Comments

I was sitting, doing nothing and, WHAM!...i got a headache. Yup, and from that headache came this...prolly because i felt like shooting myself to get rid of said headache, and because i was watching some cheesy kids movie, where everything ends up all happy and shit.

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:icondiegotterdammerung:
I like the macarbe mix of tenderness and detached suicide contmeplation. Well done.
:iconseethingpyro:
i like it. good job.

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:icondisobedient-slave:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
:iconmaxoo:
waw
very nice one :)
:iconphotographiclust:
holy shit. i've always enjoyed your poetry... but you're just getting better. this is a kick ass poem. the feel to it, the implications... yea. shit.

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:you know it's not love, don't make it look so pretty:
:iconph474:
this is really good man. I like it. You really have been improving. awesome man.

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hey, it DOES let you breathe lava!

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April 9, 2006
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